So like I’ve said I’m struggling with Gervais chapter and Spence’s having enough material.
The Blue/Robin/Australia story could fill many chapters.
The Andy/retreat ones also.
My main struggle is the pacing of Gervais/Spence.
I’ve had a few moans that the story is too much Blue focused (and he’s too perfect) and I agree it has been. Partly as 90% of feedback is about Blue and chapters based on the others get read less, but I do want to even things up next semester, possibly by alternating chapters between houses or something.
Would you guys be okay if I tried writing the summer in the usual sequential style alternating (not with a set pattern) between the retreat and Australia with just small updates from Spence and/or Gervais?
I’m not promising a daily chapter though! But less waiting for something new.
Throw other ideas at me too.